CrossRoads page 14

I think this page (and comic) would benefit from better word art. Word art is a tricky thing to do at the best of times and tutorials are unfortunately hard to find. But the tiny little *clang* text really takes a dramatic element out of it for me.
Even writing it yourself might add a little more feeling to it.

Other than that, looking pretty good. Now I'm waiting for the inevitable pain that's going to fall. Through thuds or whumps.